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[forgotten_aria]

Oh and for the record, here are my personal rules. 100 words, not including title, which may only be one word. Any gramatical errors that change the word count are accidental. I'm doing this for fun, so I'm not going to stress too much over the proofreading. Hope it's not too bad.



The cucumber salad looked perfect; topped with a curl of delicate
carrot. Sam brought to the table and placed it lovingly in the center.
He placed his hands on his hips and looked at the expression of his
guests.

Uncomfortableness spread across the table, none of them wanting to be
rude. The twitching of their bunny-like noses gave away their
discomfort. Ezthan, the appointed diplomat, took a deep breath,
accepting his duty to correct the situation.

"We appricate your hosplitality, on this mission of goodwill, but," he
paused a moment, his bunny ears slowly sinking in discomfort, "we are
meatatarians."

Comments

[desireearmfeldt]

I always admire short-short fiction, because I'm incapable of producing it, but it's so *neat*. :)

Looking forward to seeing more...

[forgotten-aria.livejournal.com]

I can't produce long fiction. I think you have the better deal.

It's just an expression of my impatientness.

[katybeth]

I like your words! Being able to describe a moment so perfectly is great.

Vestal Review is a flash fiction magazine that I have enjoyed (though I've only read it online). If you ever want to submit anything I'm happy to proofread or give feedback.

[forgotten-aria.livejournal.com]

Thank you very much for your compliment! *beam*